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Mr Blotling

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PostSubject: So I sprained my ankle...   So I sprained my ankle... I_icon_minitimeFri Jun 29, 2012 1:07 am

Yes, I'm still alive and -almost- well! I'm sure you all've been getting almost sick wondering where I've been all this time! Rolling Eyes

Anyhoo, this sprain of mine actually bears some good news for y'all since while it means I have to stay home from work for two weeks, I've actually decided to do some work on the sequel to DDatDDA (which, of course, means "Donald Duck and the Diabolical Duck Avenger"). Well, granted I actually did some preliminary work on it shortly before my injury, but whatever, this will hopefully speed up the process. Hopefully.

So, yay for activity!

The story is called "Paperinik alla riscossa" which I might translate to "Revenge of the Duck Avenger" if I (or anyone else) can't come up with a better name.

I'll just do as I did with the first one and post the draft of the first five pages right here for comments and criticism. Personally, I think I should go for a bigger size on the text (even though it's the same size as in DDatDDA, but that hardly matters) but I'm interested in what you people think. So, shoot!

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Suyope

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PostSubject: Re: So I sprained my ankle...   So I sprained my ankle... I_icon_minitimeSat Jun 30, 2012 12:53 pm

Good job Blotling!

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I'm sure you all've been getting almost sick wondering where I've been all this time! Rolling Eyes
Don't underestimate yourself, your work is very appreciated!
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Krozam

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PostSubject: Re: So I sprained my ankle...   So I sprained my ankle... I_icon_minitimeSun Jul 01, 2012 5:43 am

Not very interested personally, as I've read the story several times in my own language... but I just spotted a probable mistake, and I wanted to point it out: "They have no idea what this car!" ...can do? The sentence seems to be missing an end.
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Mr Blotling

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PostSubject: Re: So I sprained my ankle...   So I sprained my ankle... I_icon_minitimeSun Jul 01, 2012 12:13 pm

Nice find Kro!

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PostSubject: Re: So I sprained my ankle...   So I sprained my ankle... I_icon_minitimeMon Jul 02, 2012 2:21 pm

Goodie.
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